The audio is a little quiet. The panels themselves look great. The hippo's response to being punched made me laugh pretty hard.
The audio is a little quiet. The panels themselves look great. The hippo's response to being punched made me laugh pretty hard.
Hey thanks for the feedback! :)
I am not sure the significance of the pencil, but the animation itself seems like you took audio of tom and jerry or wiley coyote and put a pencil in front of some barbed wire in front of it. If the rest of it was animated like the beginning with the fearful shaking you might have improved it quite significantly, but going from some flapping animation to single frame pose jumps makes it seem like you lost interest.
True, I should’ve made it more animated instead of going from animated animation to pose to pose stuff
The executive's mustache moving to show he is speaking worked, the mouths opening but not flapping at all or the o mouth just wiggling at all did not work as well. And those bicep chins on the brothers. I looked away and looked back and thought they were short flexing men on people's shoulders.
thanks for the feedback. gonna be changing the mouths around for episode 2
Now I'm thirsty...
Which parent is under that mattress?
That only makes me wanna know even more. lol
Your Grimace is adorable.....until he's not.
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